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Unable to pay his comatose wife?s hospital bills, a brilliant psychiatrist is forced to take on an unusual patient: an organic supercomputer running mining operations on an asteroid. Will he be able to repair the computer before it crashes the asteroid into the earth?

May 19, 2012
After an organic supercomputer goes haywire and hijacks all of the world?s computer systems, its scientist creator must stop the crazed machine before it kills him.

April 24, 2012

on Unable to pay his comatose wife?s hospital bills, a brilliant psychiatrist is forced to take on an unusual patient: an organic supercomputer running mining operations on an asteroid. Will he be able to repair the computer before it crashes the asteroid into the earth?

It's Good Will Hunting in space! There's a setup on earth but the bulk of the action takes place on the asteroid. Genrewise, I'd probably say it's a sci-fi thriller, but I'm never entirely certain with genre.
on Unable to pay his comatose wife?s hospital bills, a brilliant psychiatrist is forced to take on an unusual patient: an organic supercomputer running mining operations on an asteroid. Will he be able to repair the computer before it crashes the asteroid into the earth?

I didn't made it clear in the logline, but whilst the hospital bills motivate him to take the job on the asteroid (unaware of the computer's homicidal intentions), they aren't really a prime motivator after that. The irony of the…
on House of Duncan, action/thriller

This is what I first took from the logline. When he's dumped for a dull Scottish accountant, an unhinged Brazilian must fix his anger issues in order to win the love of his life back. I reread it and got…
on An awkward 16-year old, who discovers that she has developed super-strength, must harness and control her new power while evading a covert agency eager to exploit her.

Also like it. Great logline, gives me a clear idea of the protagonist, inciting incident and the antagonist. One thing. Is the girl's goal just to harness and control her new power? Or is there something else that she's going…
on A family living in Hawaii unravels from alcoholism exposing Hawaii's underside

Concept full of drama but it sounds like a documentary logline rather than a feature. Who's the main character/protagonist? Even if it's an ensemble piece, I think you need to be specific about the lead role. Alcoholism is causing the…
on Devon Howard has built the best police force in the history of New York City. Now they’re turning on him. Will Howard win the war on crime and lose the troops?

I'm assuming that Devon Howard is chief of police (like the character name btw, not sure needed in logline though). I'm fascinated by the concept. Needs more information to grab me though. Left with lots of questions. Why is he…

Unable to pay his comatose wife?s hospital bills, a brilliant psychiatrist is forced to take on an unusual patient: an organic supercomputer running mining operations on an asteroid. Will he be able to repair the computer before it crashes the asteroid into the earth?

After an organic supercomputer goes haywire and hijacks all of the world?s computer systems, its scientist creator must stop the crazed machine before it kills him.