A young woman, kidnapped when she was a kid, returns home to the family she barely remembers and struggles to feel ?at home.?
STOCKHOLM, PENNSYLVANIA
STOCKHOLM, PENNSYLVANIA
This sounds like a movie I would see - after I've seen commercials (and maybe a movie poster). Your logline needs to be a bit more fleshed out, and detailed.
A young woman who was kidnapped as a child comes home to a family she barely remembers.
I agree with the above. Engaging premise, but I don't see what is actually happening in your story.