4 reviews
Thanks for your feedback! Based on your comments, it's pretty clear I'm not getting the core of my story across at all.?I'll be reworking what I have!
This is two stories in one logline. A reporter-subject story which is always interesting if done well or a reporter/mystery story which I think is played out. And it doesn't make much sense either -- why does she think the father is innocent? And why would the subject be upset about that, are you hinting that he is actually guilty? This one needs a lot of work.
This is two stories in one logline. A reporter-subject story which is always interesting if done well or a reporter/mystery story which I think is played out. And it doesn't make much sense either -- why does she think the father is innocent? And why would the subject be upset about that, are you hinting that he is actually guilty? This one needs a lot of work.