A young reporter and her Olympian interview subject clash when she digs into his past to reinvestigate the notorious murder she believes his father was wrongly convicted for ? a murder for which he pled guilty.

4 reviews

mateekaq Penpusher · 65 pts

Thanks for your feedback! Based on your comments, it's pretty clear I'm not getting the core of my story across at all.?I'll be reworking what I have!

Former member Penpusher · 20 pts

This is two stories in one logline. A reporter-subject story which is always interesting if done well or a reporter/mystery story which I think is played out. And it doesn't make much sense either -- why does she think the father is innocent? And why would the subject be upset about that, are you hinting that he is actually guilty? This one needs a lot of work.

Karel Segers Mentor · 5,093 pts

This is two stories in one logline. A reporter-subject story which is always interesting if done well or a reporter/mystery story which I think is played out. And it doesn't make much sense either -- why does she think the father is innocent? And why would the subject be upset about that, are you hinting that he is actually guilty? This one needs a lot of work.