mateekaq

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A young reporter and her Olympian interview subject clash when she digs into his past to reinvestigate the notorious murder she believes his father was wrongly convicted for ? a murder for which he pled guilty.

August 30, 2016
After her teenage sister commits a sudden suicide, an anxiety-disordered young woman returns to her childhood home and begins to discover family secrets that lead her to investigate the tragedy.

May 27, 2015
After her younger sister commits suicide, a young college student becomes convinced that one of her classmates is possesed by her soul, and has to help her get to the right afterlife.

June 22, 2012

on A young reporter and her Olympian interview subject clash when she digs into his past to reinvestigate the notorious murder she believes his father was wrongly convicted for ? a murder for which he pled guilty.

Thanks for your feedback! Based on your comments, it's pretty clear I'm not getting the core of my story across at all.?I'll be reworking what I have!
on Keira, a warrior just shy of her sixteenth birthday, will have to survive the creatures of a world twisted by the DNA Wars, and hope her own mutation doesn’t degenerate further as she tries to reach the City of Lights where she will be free from persecution.

I think you have a very unique idea! Sounds like a rich conflict. I would agree with the comments above on what could help make this logline better.
on After her teenage sister commits a sudden suicide, an anxiety-disordered young woman returns to her childhood home and begins to discover family secrets that lead her to investigate the tragedy.

Thanks for your input everyone! The suicide does lead the main character to begin looking into her sister's life. She discovers that her sister was living a secret life as part of an online sex trafficking ring that could have…
on After gaining superhuman powers, a group of wannabe heroes run into a bunch of hijinxs when they decide they’d rather be super-villains.

I agree with the other comments here. It's a cool, different idea, but we don't really have a sense of who your antagonist is or where the conflict comes from. If your characters have decided they want to be supervillains,…
on A childless woman gets a "wrong number" call from a kidnapper who has her son. She must trying and rescue the child before the kidnappers carry out their threats.

I would totally watch/read this.