Thanks, dpg. Actually, as per the original logline, the dramatic question is: Why is this happening?

Oh, it's a short.

Taking?the logline at face value, I conclude that the?dramatic question the rest of story will eventually answer is:??"Will the young couple lose their minds?"? Is that the?dramatic question you intend to explore in this short?? Or is the dramatic question to be explored?something else?

Adamu95 and dpg, it's nice to be challenged to improve. So on that note, here's my attempt to elaborate/differentiate:

"A young couple are on the verge of losing their minds after they fail to convince the police that their home has been invaded by another couple who look exactly like them".

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