A young aid worker tormented by his dreams learns humanity has been manipulated for aeons. Only by accepting the past does he have a chance to save the future, humanity and the people he loves.

"Accepting the past" is the action your lead character must take in order to achiever the goal of saving humanity.

This action does not seem like it would be exciting or compelling to watch on screen and probably will not hook the reader.

You might want to give your logline a more compelling action that the character 'must take'. in order to make the logline more exciting.

Agreed with the others on this thread. You'll be more likely to sell a script with clarity and detail than vague descriptions.

>>>I?d like to have the logline make people want to find out more.

The purpose of a logline is to pitch your script to movie makers, not movie viewers.? To people who you want to invest millions of dollars and a year or more of their lives to produce -- not $10-12 for? a ticket and a couple of hours of their time.? They expect to be told what the script is about -- not teased.? Withholding or obscuring the vital details is counterproductive -- a turn off, not a turn off for this bottom line, tough minded crowd.