A temple virgin uncovers a secret that the high priest would rather conceal: the Day of Atonement isn't working anymore. When he marries her off to a hundred year-old man, she loses everything she's ever known. Now she must find a way to prevent another unjust marriage — and restore the Atonement — before it's too late.

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Temple Virgin Book 1

5 reviews

dpg Singularity · 112,231 pts

And what "isn't working anymore" about Yom Kippur?

dpg Singularity · 112,231 pts

Not only does the logline have 2 inciting incidents, it has 2 objective goals.

logeye 0 pts

Supernatural fantasy world based on elements in Jewish and Christian legend. No glowing rock-giants though.