A recently divorced doctor and an entrepreneur facing an existential crisis, form an unlikely partnership and take the help of earthly wizards to overcome the trials of life.

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4 reviews

Nathan Phillips 0 pts

Same again, there line sounds interesting, but lacks clarity. 'Trials of life' is ambiguous, and there term 'earthly wizards' is confusing; is the MC not from Earth? That said, it is still possible to see a potential story within the line, but it is just unclear what the story is specifically about.

Also, my first review, so probably don't take the critique too seriously.

dpg Singularity · 112,231 pts

>>>to overcome the trials of life

That covers a l-o-t of territory. A plot should focus on one specific problem that needs to be urgently solved.

blossomingscripts Penpusher · 1 pts

I agree with the other comment. Your logline doesn't hint at any plot, and is overall very vague. Who are these wizards? What does this unlikely partnership result in? Some type of road trip or something? What happens in this film?