A pathological liar is subpoenaed to testify in a murder trial against his only friend.
So Help Me
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You got some really good inputs from everybody but your logline sure trigger my imagination. Keep working on it!
Flaw and gender are definitely clear... "pathological liar" and "HIS only friend" clear those up. i agree about character information. my intended conflict was that he has to tell the truth in this situation, which conflicts himself psychologically (because he is a pathological liar) and his only friendship (against his friend) but that totally didn't come across so i understand the confusion. any suggestions would be appreciated :)
Flaw and gender are definitely clear... "pathological liar" and "HIS only friend" clear those up. i agree about character information. my intended conflict was that he has to tell the truth in this situation, which conflicts himself psychologically (because he is a pathological liar) and his only friendship (against his friend) but that totally didn't come across so i understand the confusion. any suggestions would be appreciated :)