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The logline sets up a situation for a possibly interesting plot, but I think the plot needs to be fleshed out.. ?What specifically becomes his dramatic problem, hence, his objective goal, as a result of hiding in a small Iowa town? ?(And is he placed in Iowa before or after snitching? ?This needs clarification as it makes a big difference in the how the plot? might unfold.)
Thank you. ?It is before he has had a chance to testify.
A small-time club DJ who is obsessed with 70s disco sees a mob execution, so FBI Witness Protection sticks him in a rural Iowa town while he waits for his chance to testify. ?When he helps a young country songwriter create a smash hit song, the fame could become deadly for them both...
Sort of a male version of "Sister Act" with a "Green Acres" flair - could work nicely