A ‘Thrill-Thirsty’ son learns that ‘Knowledge is a double-edged sword’ and promises to wield it wisely, after crossing roads with his Inspiring-Mentor, his Dad (a celebrated Police-Officer!).

by gokulthedreamer Penpusher · 131 pts 1,282 views

4 reviews

seanamulvihill Logliner · 311 pts ★ Accepted

i think we need a lit bit more of the external plot in the logline. ?Here it just sounds like an introspective journey...who is the enemy he will have to face to wield this knowledge in order to win?

gokulthedreamer Penpusher · 131 pts

Thank You... made a lotta sense...!

Here i go again:

A ?Thrill-Thirsty? son learns that ?Knowledge is a double-edged sword? and promises to wield it wisely, after crossing roads with his Inspiring-Mentor, his Dad (a Retiring-Celebrated Police-Officer!). But he is on the 'Other-Side' of the Law already. The Dad is not sure whom he must protect. The LAW of the Corrupt-Politicians or his SON who has taken their bait!?