A married man pretends to be a lesbian girl on Internet to fantasize with another girl. When she is killed the police starts to investigate on her virtual acquaintances so the private life of the man goes in troubles.

by ItalianMaestro Penpusher · 25 pts 1,066 views

2 reviews

laughingfire Penpusher · 176 pts

This is interesting and feels like it could be an intense thriller. But the logline feels bulky. If it can be consolidated into one sentence that might help.

FFF Mentor · 7,850 pts

Hello,
focus on "the troubles" the main character will face in the movie.