A lonely professional single mother plots to get her money back when she is lured into a costly and terror filled situation by a professional psychic who convinces her through an elaborate and ingenious scheme that her life is endangered by the paranormal.

In the Rite

5 reviews

Former member Penpusher · 20 pts

Sounds interesting. It can be portrayed in many genres. Comedy or horror or drama to think of few.

dpg Singularity · 112,231 pts

Nice, Richiev. A suggested polish:

After being conned out of her son's college fund 30 days before he is to leave for college, a single mother hatches a scheme to con the con and get the money back.

Added a ticking clock. (That the con was a psychic may be integral to the story, but I'm not sure it needs to be in the logline.)

Richiev Singularity · 82,714 pts

oops, sorry for the typo's.

"After being duped by a psychic out of her sons college fund, a single mother hatches a scheme to con the con and get the money back."

That's a little better.