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Then we get the second act.
I am assuming we don?t want to worship the machine? So what do we do? That is the story.
Who is the lead character?
What do they want?
What is standing in their way?
There's a bit of ambiguity here. I'm assuming it's the AI that has the great awakening - it's fairly obvious this is the case but I think it could be worded a little better for clarity. I feel like this is mostly just the set up though. Who's the main character? What's their goal? The inciting incident seems to be the moment the AI demands human worship but that's right at the end. What happens next?
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