A trio of college students discovers street racing becoming deadly when they discover a racer was a serial killer.

Midnight Ride

3 reviews

GeminiSilverOfficial 6 pts

Good hook, but add an adjective for the protagonists and create huge death stakes along with a compelling force of antagonism.

Something like:

"A trio of car-savvy college students discover the deadly consequences of street racing when their competitor is an infamous serial killer hellbent on revenge."

SSalvatore Logliner · 686 pts

I feel like the name of the story is key.

Odie Samurai · 2,208 pts

What if this group was "A trio of gear-head college students..." to help with focus? In your story - what is making this deadly? What are the stakes if they lose? Also, would help if you had a big bad rival.

Take care.