A group of city guys must transform and go undercover to hunt down the murderer of their transgender friend.

I'm still unclear to me about what constitutes the hook of the story. Does it mean what I think it means, surgery, taking hormone, etc., or...?

Thanks Abby and I sincerely apologise if I have offended you or anyone with my phrasing. If you refer to the title, this I know is grammatically incorrect but an intentional artistic choice to try to convey the similarity with the title Transformers. The 'transform' in the logline but also in the movie has many meanings with reference to 'transition' and 'transform' and character development. Hopefully portraying both Transgender and Transformer references. I really appreciate your feedback. Sorry again. Ade

I think the logline itself is fine, but I believe 'transgendered' is appropriate for this phrasing. It sounds unnatural to me as a gay lady to leave out the 'd'.

I think you may want to tip your hand a little more in regards to the 'transform' part, but since I don't know what is behind door number one it's hard to say.