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A group of city guys must transform and go undercover to hunt down the murderer of their transgender friend.

August 2, 2014
After the murder of their best friend, a group of regular city guys struggle to find the suspect but unearth secrets about their friend and a conspiracy to take over the city.

July 31, 2014

on A group of city guys must transform and go undercover to hunt down the murderer of their transgender friend.

Thanks Abby and I sincerely apologise if I have offended you or anyone with my phrasing. If you refer to the title, this I know is grammatically incorrect but an intentional artistic choice to try to convey the similarity with…
on A group of city guys must transform and go undercover to hunt down the murderer of their transgender friend.

Thanks Richiev. It is a comedy, action adventure, the guys have a failed attempt at dressing up but the 'transform' indicates they have to try something else. Think Transformers meets White Chicks.
on After the murder of their best friend, a group of regular city guys struggle to find the suspect but unearth secrets about their friend and a conspiracy to take over the city.

Thanks for the comments. I accept the advice about 'city boys'
on In A Small Town is a gritty thriller following the trials and tribulations of a small town cop who has a near death event accompanied with the realization his hometown is not what it seems.

'trials and tribulations' doesn't reflect the 'gritty' aspect of the set-up.
on Evan was once heralded as a front page success story for his popular smartphone game, ?Cat Pipe?. But ten years later, he finds himself living in unemployed obscurity with his slacker best friend and ?artist? in residence, Andy. What goes up must come down. Way down.

Try to condense the log line down. Also leave out the character names.