A dysfunctional dad and his rebellious daughter are forced to join each other in a bike race where they battle the establishment and each other relentlessly.
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Great comments. Thanks to all. Back to the drawing board.
And what's at stake? What do they stand to lose if they fail?
I have to agree with Nicholas. Since riding in a bike race and fighting the establishment seem an odd pairing, give us some context.
Also, what establishment. The bike riding establishment? The establishment he works for? The government?
Is fighting the establishment the fathers goal or is it connecting with his daughter?
Finally, I agree, you should tell what event forced father and daughter to ride in the bike race: Give us the inciting incident.
Hope that helped, good luck with this!