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It did help, thanks.
You have two inciting incidents
When his son needs an emergency operation
When he stumbles upon his long lost friend.
I would stick with the inciting incident which sets his course of action.
Here would be an example: (Your logline would be different of course)
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"When his son suddenly needs an emergency operation, a cash strapped (Give us an occupation) devises a plan to steal the money from a rich former friend."
Hope that helped