A demoted police detective fights to find justice for her daughter after witnessing a grisly homicide that occurs near her newly assigned workplace.

Hi Vexmeister,

Thank you for this, perhaps I should have used discovered rather than witnessed, basically the detective got herself reassigned so she could avenge her daughter, that's the third act twist but I didn't want to reveal that in the logline.

Best

Jim in Japan

Right now I'm confused. Does the grisly homicide have something to do with her daughter? It's unclear. Also, if a police detective witnesses a homicide, they would start investigating it, wouldn't they Do they do that? Or do they go on a separate quest to find justice for their daughter? I'm also wondering how the issue of their being 'demoted' connects to the other elements... that suggests a professional redemption arc, rather than anything to do with their daughter.