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Thank you for the review and advice Vexmeister.
Has potential, but is currently too vague. We need specificity in loglines. He must confront his deepest fears – what are they? Is this set in our world or a fantasy world? What time period? What is the malevolent force and how is it terrorising his community? Without specificity, we can't visualise the story and the logline has no impact.