Who is Snowden and why did he do what he did? Is Snowden a hero or traitor?

Snowden Saga: Traitor or Hero

4 reviews

Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai · 1,742 pts

Read the "write it" section of the logline. Okay, great, you want to write a story about Snowden. But who is your protagonist, what is their goal, who is trying to stop them from achieving that goal?

Richiev Singularity · 82,714 pts

As a rule, you shouldn't use questions in your logline. I know some taglines use them but for a logline you should give us a glimpse of what the story's about; an inciting incident, a character, a goal and what's standing in the characters way. (A bit of Irony doesn't hurt either)

Hope that helped, good luck with this!

lmllease 0 pts

Mr Snowden is a Natl Security Agency spy who leaked confidential information to the press. Im not sure whether to call him a hero or traitor?