When an image conscious love expert falls for the wrong guy, a crass hacker geek, her page views plummet, forcing her ruthless producer to manipulate her insecurities to tear them apart. 31 Words (Revised) (RomCom)

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SSalvatore Samurai · 686 pts

Thanks for the suggestion dpg,

She is a Youtuber love expert and the Youtube device is critical for the plot of the movie.

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SSalvatore Samurai · 686 pts

Thanks Richiev,

The wrong guy is actually the right guy, but he is certainly not perfect, in fact he's an emotional wreck but has a good heart. Not what she thinks she wants but the guy who will make her happy.

So maybe change to "falls for the 'wrong' guy. "

Or maybe omit the "wrong guy" wording entirely "falls for a camera shy hacker geek".

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Richiev Singularity · 82,714 pts

The problem with the new logline attempt is, since the lead fall for the 'wrong guy', the producer is actually doing her a favor by trying to break her up. It is more meaningful is she falls for 'Mr. Right" the perfect guy and the producer self servingly tries to split up the couple.