When two missing teenage girls bodies are discovered, an unlikely pair of detectives must race to solve the case before more people dissapear.

Marshland

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Former member Penpusher · 20 pts

Sorry, I just noticed your question. Here's the model I used the last time I wrote a logline.

1: The subject of the sentence to describe an imperfect but passionate and active protagonist.
2: The verb to depict the battle.
3:The direct object to describe an insurmountable antagonist who tries to stop the protagonist from reaching
4: a physical goal on account of
5: the stakes, if the goal is not reached.

Alexpsmith Penpusher · 10 pts

Hi... Which method do you Prefer????
Yes i agree Iam using the
Insighting
Spec Protag
Objective
Stakes.

But Karel class of 2014 uses
Flaw, Function, infighting, Goal,Shadow and Stakes....
Which do you use???

Former member Penpusher · 20 pts

I think "the bodies of two missing teenaged girls" sounds better than "two missing teenage girls' bodies." I know my wording is a little longer but, in this instance, it sounds more natural to me. Also, can you hint at why the paring of the two detectives is so unlikely?