When two girls are kidnapped memories from the past drive a psychology student to hunt for the man who took her and her sister 14 years ago.

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obie1jonobi Penpusher · 126 pts

There is something here that would make a good story, it just needs a little bit of tidying. I think dpg struck something here. I think you?re referencing a serial kidnapper, or something akin to that. You just need to make that part a little more clear.

dpg Singularity · 112,231 pts

>>>"to hunt for the man who took her and her sister 14 years ago"

What about the? current kidnapping?? Are the two kidnappings related?? Do the clues finger the same perpetrator?