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Good that you changed the word amount and it seems better now.
It looks like a great story and can't wait to see what you do with it.
Peter K.
You do have a point, 36 words is probably a bit much.
How does this sound?:
When told the fate of an insane prisoner is worse than normal, a deceptive murderer must get the court to reconsider him sane.
it's a bit wordy - Any way to simplify it?