When the love of his life is kidnapped by pirates because she carries a certain piece of gold, a smith teams up with a renowned pirate to rescue her.

by Linnéa Penpusher · 24 pts 0 views

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Former member Penpusher · 20 pts

Good start. I feel like "because she carries a certain piece of gold" is not that necessary. Also I would put in some character trait for the smith. For example: "an honorable young smith".