When secrets threaten to surface and trust is about to shatter; a husband and wife independently devise their own plan to kill the other before their pasts are revealed.

Thank you all for the feedback. I've taken it all on board and will have a think about which way to go.

Yes, good points by all.

I've come to realize that for my style of writing, it's useful to write, re-write and re-re-write the logline at every stage of the creative process. It helps me to discover what the story is really about and when I finally figure that out, keep it in sharp focus.

And primes me for my 15 second pitch to Steven Speilberg when we chance to meet in an elevator. (Well, I can dream, can't I?)

Good points, Tony & Kriss. But I'm not entirely convinced. Hey - that's just me.

Kriss, judging from your logline your story could be -for instance - a family drama or a crime thriller or even Neo-noir.