When Santa Claus goes rogue and begins kidnapping kids, a cynical 12-year-old must venture to the North Pole in order to save his abducted brother.

2 reviews

Bo Teng Chea Penpusher · 28 pts

Hi NeedyGoldfish,

Your idea is great but I feel like I needing to be more specific about why Santa Claus went rogue because it felt like a plot shortcut. (there is probaby is very good explanation)
Would love to see this comedy on screen !

Good luck on the writing

BO

ermaa Penpusher · 29 pts

Nice one! Very on-point with the logline formula aswell!