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Penpusher · 29 points

271 points to Logliner

on When a lethal alien is brought on board a spaceship by accident, the crew has to fight for their survival in order to escape

ALIEN$ I agree with the previous penpusher. The beginning could also be something in the lines of "When accidentally bringing a lethal alien onboard the spaceship..."
on After being left home alone by accident over christmas, an eight year old boy must defend his house from a duo of incompetent burglars.

Good job! I would maybe throw some of the words around in the beginning. "After accidentally being left behind over Christmas, a mischievous 8-year-old has to protect his family's home from a duo of incompetent burglars."
on When Santa Claus goes rogue and begins kidnapping kids, a cynical 12-year-old must venture to the North Pole in order to save his abducted brother.

Nice one! Very on-point with the logline formula aswell!