When Ed tries to commit suicide a mysterious stranger shows up and offers him a deal he cannot refuse and when Ed break the deal he has to battle not just himself but other more dark forces as well. /Amanda

Is this a bit of a Vanilla Sky type film? A guy is offered happiness/a better life in return for...something? I agredd with Kalle. Perhaps define exactly what deal he makes.

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Maybe it's just me, but I find it a bit unclear exactly what Ed's goal is and what the stakes are, considering he started on the verge of suicide (how much worse could it get?). I assume the story will reveal all that, but I would like a bit more clarity in the logline. Maybe shorten it down a few words as well? /Kalle