When an underprivileged Pakistani boy is murdered by his richer and more influential counterpart, his friends set on a journey to seek justice in a corrupt world designed to protect those in power. But is it justice they seek or revenge?

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Former member Penpusher · 20 pts

After failing to charge the son of a corrupt politician for the murder of his best friend, a desperate lawyer takes justice into his own hands by...(Blowing up the Pakistani National Assembly/ becoming a politician himself to overthrow the government/ inciting a revolution in the streets of Islamibad... Whatever it is is the hero HAS/ is spurned to do because of the death of his best friend...or whatever happens in this true story...)

Screenwriters Anonymous 0 pts

For some reason my placeholders for (NAME) were omitted because I used brackets:

"Based on the true story of (NAME), a young atty, ...."

Screenwriters Anonymous 0 pts

Question - if the lawyer is trying to "seek justice" in court system, then isn't that in a way "revenge" since he's connected to the victim? Also, I would omit the "inspiring" and leave it at "Based on the true story of ..."

I don't think the moral dilemma is compelling enough - there needs to be a stronger goal even if it's internalized.

"Based on the true story of , a young attorney, who seeks to avenge the death of his best friend at the hands of a corrupt Karachi politician."