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'Inspired by true events; When an underprivileged Pakistani boy is murdered by his richer and more influential counterpart, A rookie lawyer (his best friend) sets on a journey to seek justice against a boy seemingly above the law. As his efforts continue to fail, he must ask himself; is it justice he seeks or revenge?'
Yeah, that makes sense. Thanks for your help. Any other suggestions guys? The advice is really helping.
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'Inspired by true events; When an underprivileged Pakistani boy is murdered by his richer and more influential counterpart, A rookie lawyer (his best friend) sets on a journey to seek justice against a boy seemingly above the law. As his efforts continue to fail, he must ask himself; is it justice he seeks or revenge?'
I feel the story is primarily about the pursuit of justice and his failure to do so at every turn which eventually leads him to take matters into his own hands. With that in mind, Is it possible to explore…
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'Inspired by true events; When an underprivileged Pakistani boy is murdered by his richer and more influential counterpart, A rookie lawyer (his best friend) sets on a journey to seek justice against a boy seemingly above the law. As his efforts continue to fail, he must ask himself; is it justice he seeks or revenge?'
Yep. man would be better. Thanks.
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A once academically gifted young man is intent on getting his life back on track. One night while driving home, he?s nearly killed in an accident and falls for the woman who saves him, but her lies and past horror may destroy everything.
What happened to him? Why does he need to get his life back on track? How does she play a part in him getting his life back in order? Why would her past(unless it connects with her present/future) destroy everything?…
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A teenage prankster must convince his father (a cynical cop) that their elderly neighbour is a psycopath before she kills again.
Sounds interesting. Here are a few concerns 1 Isn't this film very similar to 'Disturbia"?(starring Shia Lebeouf). 2 Why is the cop cynical?Why is the teenager a 'prankster' or rather what does that have to do with the plot? 3…
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When an underprivileged Pakistani boy is murdered by his richer and more influential counterpart, his friends set on a journey to seek justice in a corrupt world designed to protect those in power. But is it justice they seek or revenge?
I'll try it again. how does this work? "The inspiring true story of a rookie lawyer who learns of the brutal murder of his best friend in the streets of Karachi by a rich and powerful politician, He attempts the…
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Killing is what he is afraid of. The circumstantial choice of becoming a writer because of his past costs him desertion and rejection from her lover. The writer never gives up. After several years of exploration and reaching the new highs he becomes the Times Contributor Of the Year to prove his mettle. All fame and name is enough, but he realizes why still he is not at peace and kills himself when at his peak.
Why isn't he happy? Why does his lover leave him? Who is he afraid of 'killing'? I agree with the comments above in that this isn't a logline rather a synopsis. Good luck with it. The idea has potential.
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When an underprivileged Pakistani boy is murdered by his richer and more influential counterpart, his friends set on a journey to seek justice in a corrupt world designed to protect those in power. But is it justice they seek or revenge?
Thank you for commenting. 1. Who? The rich boy is the same age. 2. What? The friends attempt to use the judicial system but it fails them. Should they take matters in to their own hands? Is that 'justice' or…
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Batman is being sought for the murder of ex-cons, cops, and Rachel Dawes. Commisioner Gordon meets a man named "StrongMan" who tells him he can capture Batman. Mr. Gordon grants him immunity for any crimes he many commit in capturing Batman. However Strongman is working for an underground mob. Due to the events that have unfolded Batman has fallen into a deep depression.
I'm confused. Is strongman inspired by the character 'The tattooed Strongman' from the comics? Why him? Why would Gordon who knows Batman is innocent( in all films,literature and cartoon) want him dead? Furthermore having a good relationship with Batman couldn't…
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When a playboy, slacker returns to join his father?s growing corporate empire, tensions mount between his toe-the-line older brother over who is better suited to run the company.
I agree with the element of urgency with a sick father. I'm also confused why the audience would root for the playboy? Is it because the other one is corrupt? Why does the playboy decide to return? Why did he…
