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This sounds like a great concept for a thriller.
I do wonder, who is "the" culprit? Maybe specify what the culprit has done. Same goes for "the" underground network, I'd replace that with "an" underground network. Also, a comma somewhere in the middle would be great. Something like this:
"When an introverted storyboard artist gets assigned a mysterious homicide, she has to infiltrate an underground network in order to unveil the killer's true identity."