When an elite intergalactic warrior discovers that a greedy, powerful cabal plans to deport almost the entire human race to a life of slavery in mines on an alien planet he risks his career and his life in order to save the human race and the woman he loves

by Karel Segers Mentor · 5,093 pts 1,389 views

Protectors of the species

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pandedyer 0 pts

I was instantly drawn in but instantly confused by the word "cabal" which was distracting. How about slave trader instead and use the word export instead of deport.

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Hi Richiev! I like your version, but does non discover enough the story i wrote!

Former member

Hi Patrick! What do you mean about "define where are the powerful cabal is"?