When an ancient bounty hunter arrives to destroy all knowledge of alien influence, an alien sheriff must rely on gunmanship alone to save her small western town.

Gonslinkh

5 reviews

Former member 20 pts

Thanks Geno.

I just needed to get that dig in about Cowboys & Aliens because it caused a complete halt on this project when I started writing it as a novel three years ago.

sharkeatingman 0 pts

I like the logline exactly the way it is. As for the other comments...yours is still just a logline, while "Cowboys and Aliens" is part of history, raking in millions upon millions of dollars.

Stay humble. You've done well on the logline, and continued good luck moving forward on the project.

Geno Scala (sharkeatingman), judge

Tor Dollhouse 0 pts

<3 #4 & #4 THANK GOD

#2 & #3 WOO, Sounds exciting. Cant wait!

Former member 20 pts

1) The bounty hunter.

2) Everything that has either been influenced by or interacted with aliens - from technology to buildings to people. Basically, if you've so much as seen anything considered "alien", like, I don't know - a giant alien bounty hunter crash landing on Earth - you're toast.

3) It's Earth, the sheriff arrived years before the bounty hunter and has hidden everything alien about themselves to blend in with human kind, which is why they can't suddenly go all "superman" and save everybody, so must rely on her 'Earthly' skills.

4) Mine won't be a pile of shit trying to hide behind millions of dollars of special effects.

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4) Mine won't be a pile of shit trying to hide behind millions of dollars of special effects.

Tor Dollhouse 0 pts

me likey :D

Only advice would be is: What is the alien sheriff saving the town from? And I know you said all knowledge of alien influence so is that a library or ?? Im presuming someone or something and if they are both alien is it just on an alien planet or aliens on earth? What separates this from Aliens VS Cowboys?