When a young Midwest psychic with a secret loses her supernatural gifts, instinct leads Crystal True to snowbird country where she uncovers the family she always dreamed of having.

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pandedyer 0 pts

How does she know that it is her instinct leading her and not her psychic ability? Maybe something else or someone else's psychic ability can lead her.

wilsondownunder Penpusher · 1 pts

Hi, switching out Crystal True with "her" will make this read better. I don't know what snowbird country is...perhaps switch this out to something any reader will be able to grasp and visualize instantly.

Good luck

Richiev Singularity · 82,714 pts

Midwest: With a Secret: Crystal True: Snowbird country: Always dreamed of having. These are things that can be left out of the logline.

"When a young psychic loses her supernatural gifts, she uses instinct to uncover her family."

of course now we have to build it back up because it makes no sense.
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"When an orphan loses her psychic abilities, She must rely on natural instincts to search for her long lost family while one step ahead of a controlling and abusive foster father."
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Hope that helped, good luck with this!