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Another angle:
“A late-night Wiccan radio host sets out to rescue [a recently dumped] listener when her [retribution] spell unleashes something much more sinister.”
As a reader, the phrase “something far/much more sinister” is considered a teaser. Loglines are supposed to tell. Thus, I would rewrite to inject the sinister stakes to help the premise.
Make this yours, take care.
Hi grbrinkley,
This is how I personally see the story:
A Wiccan radio host who unleashes something sinister and loses one of her audience when she casts a spell to assist her must now get her back by putting her own life in danger.
I hope this helps.