When a toilet embarks on a journey to self discovery, his dreams are flushed away when a catastrophic injury causes his flush valve to remain open.

3 reviews

CraigDGriffiths 20,463 pts

It needs a rewrite regardless.

Valve being stuck is the obstacle. What does he do to resolve this to reach his/her goal.

Richiev Singularity · 82,714 pts

The Toilet should have a goal. You say his dream is flushed away, tell us what that dream is.