When an institutionalized shopaholic finds out that the perverse clinical director use his patients as guinea pigs in a medical trial meant to increase consumerism habits, he must fight his addiction to sabotage the experiment and escape from the clinic.

Escape From The Mall /?Dr. Foulashop Or How I Learned To Stop Warrying And Shop Happily

4 reviews

FFF 7,850 pts

It's a comedy, like dr. strangelove.

dpg 112,231 pts

What's the genre? Comedy?

FFF 7,850 pts

what about:

"When an institutionalized shopaholic finds out that the perverse clinical director use his patients as guinea pigs in a medical trial meant to increase consumerism habits, he must fight his addiction to sabotage the experiment and escape from the clinic."

Richiev Singularity · 82,714 pts

The main problem with this logline is, you have to read it a couple times to understand it.

These phrases are a bit confusing or awkward:

ruined shopaholic
crazy addiction treatment center
serum of mass consumption
regain the civilized world

I would try saying the same thing but in a clearer manner in order to get your story across.