On the run from a determined street enforcer, a young Londoner will do anything and everything to avoid capture but the enforcer has pledged to kill himself in the event of failure.

Lord of Strife

64 reviews

Kim Penpusher · 1 pts

Needs to be more concise.

Alexpsmith Penpusher · 10 pts

Thanks for your feedback. Switched Order. Chiseled Vocabulary. Added Verbose. :)
Cheers ;)

Alexpsmith Penpusher · 10 pts

If the Antagonist vows to kill himself there is no Movie.
As above said there has to be some connection, change of heart that makes it an option to change direction.
Why does he have to out run this Enforcer.....What about the boss?