When a nice holiday cruise turns bloody, a detective is able to eliminate the murderer after his son surrenders himself to lead the detective straight to her.

2 reviews

dpg Singularity · 112,231 pts

As Nir Shelter said, ?it's confusing.

And it seems to give away the ending, the solution to murder, something a logline should not do. ?A logline implicitly raises a dramatic question, but it never answers it.

Neer Shelter Singularity · 55,464 pts

This sentence is confusing, I'm not sure who does what and why.

Who is the main character?
What is their inciting incident?
What is their goal?