When a mistress learns her lover has died and his death erroneously ruled a suicide, she must untangle the true cause of his death.

by Ckharper Samurai · 1,600 pts 0 views

Seedling of idea here. So probative questions will help me workshop this. Thinking mistress actually did it but she has some psychologist issue hence word “untangle” here. (And think that should haven been ending of a certain HBO show by the way.) I want her to seem like truly sympathetic protagonist until twist.

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Odie Samurai · 2,208 pts

This is what I can see, make this yours.
“A former detective must unravel the true-crime when the spouse of her dead lover seeks revenge”

Ckharper Samurai · 1,600 pts

Another attempt:

An ex-detective turned lonely housewife feels alive again when she sleeps with an old flame, but when he ends up dead she must hunt the killer before she’s next.