Thanks Karel and SQM, this exercise has been an eye opener for me. We get so caught up in our stories (in OUR own heads) that the seemingly simple ideas get muddied up with useless and often misleading detail. Your experienced comments are very much appreciated.
My head hurts from trying to crack this one open. If anyone has a minute, please take a look at my site: www.joeymay.com for a short synopsis of this story (I don't want to clutter the page here). Perhaps having a better understanding of the story will open it up.
SQM: Good observation with remembering the film "Somewhere in Time". What makes this story different is that the protagonist's visions reveal that his past lover is ALSO alive today - in present time. His challenge initially begins with trying to find her. But the real twist is that someone else is too - A 160 year 'Love Triangle' if you will.
Thanks,
-Joey