When a man born with a fox tail falls in love, he must overcome his insecurities about how he looks, to win his foxy lady.

5 reviews

Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Samurai · 767 pts

Hellow White Shadow,

I would like his "foxy lady" being a real vixen. This could be a great tale about tolerance, the feeling of superiority... I like the idea of the hero disturbed by his human appearance when he falls in love with a vixen...

FFF Mentor · 7,850 pts

Hello
Try to include a better description of "the man".

garyedwards Penpusher · 51 pts

A love story is always a tear mover and heart beater, the story can be made to a feature film...

wheelsonfire101234 Penpusher · 51 pts

nice use of context. I also like how you mention your characters insecurities ?in the log line.

puffin_jacket Penpusher · 90 pts

Hiya,

I think this sounds cute, perhaps the man could be described a little more?