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Penpusher · 90 points

210 points to Logliner

on When the normalcy of an overly meticulous statistical analyst is disrupted by the appearance of a small cloud above his head, he must find a way to get rid of it before his crititcal work presentation.

EDIT 01 When an overly meticulous Statistics Consultant is disrupted by a small cloud, he must find a way to remove it before his critical work presentation.
on When a man born with a fox tail falls in love, he must overcome his insecurities about how he looks, to win his foxy lady.

Hiya,I think this sounds cute, perhaps the man could be described a little more?
on when a dog savagely bites the hand of a colleague of a young vet; she must reattach it in order to save his life.

Hiya,I like this logline and the sense of urgency it creates with the stakes that are involved.The when needs a capital letter, and perhaps a little restructuring? 'bites the hand of a young vets colleague'.Can the young vet be described…