5 reviews
Hellow White Shadow,
I would like his "foxy lady" being a real vixen. This could be a great tale about tolerance, the feeling of superiority... I like the idea of the hero disturbed by his human appearance when he falls in love with a vixen...
Hello
Try to include a better description of "the man".
A love story is always a tear mover and heart beater, the story can be made to a feature film...
nice use of context. I also like how you mention your characters insecurities ?in the log line.
Hiya,
I think this sounds cute, perhaps the man could be described a little more?