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I'd try not to use the word archive twice. i really like this premise, it feels that since MC is limited edition he feels he's entitled to lead the pack.
Great point dpg. Thank you.
My only caveat is the challenge of the target audience. ? Kids aren't going to pick up on and appreciate the references to characters and plots in Shakespeare's plays. ?The trick is to do what Pixar does so well, tell a story that ?plays on two levels, entertaining kids while appealing to adults.
Good luck with the story.