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Yes Craig, I think it can ony be a black comedy.?But I think when?everybody gets powers there is no conflict. And when there is no conflict there is no story.
The thing I find a little strange is "clumsy" and a focus on "good looks". ?You have it down as a horror but reads as a comedy.
I can can almost see a story. ?But why not just spread the virus for the good of mankind. ?Everyone gets powers, we keep our intelligence and beauty is redefined. ?I am missing the internal logic. ?I have no doubt it is in your story, but I can't see it in the logline.
i wish I had more to offer.
Thanks Nir.