When a jealous mother asks her 10 years old geek son to spy on his father,he finds him dating his new teacher and decides to break up the relationship by foiling their every move to save his family from disintegrating.

by hihello8484 Logliner · 445 pts 1,529 views

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1. When a jealous mother asks her 10 years old geek son to spy on his father,he finds him dating his new teacher.Reluctant to inform her about it,he decides to break up the relationship by foiling their every move and saves his family from disintegrating.

 

2.When a jealous mother asks her 10 years old geek son to spy on his father,he finds him dating his new teacher and decides to break up the relationship by foiling their every move to save his family from disintegrating.

 

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6 reviews

seanamulvihill Logliner · 311 pts

it's good, but i think it can be way shorter. ?"a ten year old boy sets out to break up his father's affair before mom finds out."

CraigDGriffiths Singularity · 20,463 pts

If you want to keep the mum as a motivation.

Spying for his mum a ten year old discover dads affair with his teacher and sets out the ruin the romance instead of telling mum.